It seems ok, i would suggest cutting down on the amount of Crystal Beast related spells/traps you run, it looks cloggy and you run the risk of having dead cards in hand that don't help you much.
You could run Summoner Monk to discard spells you don't need and possible make rank 4 plays. I guess adding Instant Fusion and Norden doesn't hurt to much. Maybe run some Solemns.
I don't know much about Crystal Beast, but i hope that helps a little.
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